Chinook Fisherman's Fate
We are going to meet our new neighbors. So are traveling in canoes. We have our eyes out for danger. The kids were watching the waterfalls while the adults listened to the sound of the canoes as they slowly passed by. It sounded like small waves starting to form at the ocean.
But then, when I closed my eyes for two seconds, I could not see the other canoes. All I could see was rough water and two screaming children. I saw a couple of waterfalls and the water got swifter and swifter. There were some rocks close to shore. So I threw the two youngest kids onto shore so they would be safe.
Then the canoe flipped over. Then we swam to shore. The men were waiting with the two children on shore. The canoe was broken in half. We continued on with the adventure.
Cole Lucky, 4th grade
But then, when I closed my eyes for two seconds, I could not see the other canoes. All I could see was rough water and two screaming children. I saw a couple of waterfalls and the water got swifter and swifter. There were some rocks close to shore. So I threw the two youngest kids onto shore so they would be safe.
Then the canoe flipped over. Then we swam to shore. The men were waiting with the two children on shore. The canoe was broken in half. We continued on with the adventure.
Cole Lucky, 4th grade
1 comment:
I love your story Cole!! Super job using description words. I am going to read this to our whole class!
Mrs. Kelly
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